Thank you for your application. Upon reviewing it, we've determined that we need a little more information before we can make a final decision.
Please provide more detail about Kurama's motivations: as a demon. For example, why does he choose to counsel people towards a better path? How does he address the duality of being kind with sometimes being extraordinarily violent? Does Shuichi ever regret what Youko does when in control, even if they're merged?
Please also revise the writing sample to meet the word count and dialogue requirements.
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Please provide more detail about Kurama's motivations: as a demon. For example, why does he choose to counsel people towards a better path? How does he address the duality of being kind with sometimes being extraordinarily violent? Does Shuichi ever regret what Youko does when in control, even if they're merged?
Please also revise the writing sample to meet the word count and dialogue requirements.
You can provide these revisions in a reply to this comment or by amending your original application. If you do the latter, please identify the amended information with a different font colour, style, or heading within the app, as opposed to writing over the noted sections. You have 72 hours to provide these revisions in order to be considered during this application cycle. If you require additional time due to extenuating circumstances, please contact the mod team.