Thank you for your application. Upon reviewing it, we've determined that we need a little more information before we can make a final decision. While the character concept thus far is very interesting, we need a little more clarification as far as his personality and motivations go.

How has being casteless affected him? What aspects of his personality stem from that? Why does he help those in need? Is it because of duty and a selfless nature, or are his reasons more personal and/or selfish? Since he’s from the Dragon Age canon and has been topside for a while, what are some of his opinions on groups outside the Legionnaires?

Why does he have trouble forming attachments? Is he conscious of this part of his personality? If the people he helps have a tendency to want to form a deeper relationship, why does he persist and how does he deal with that pattern?

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